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Rip the skin off my blood-drenched
FACE
And condemn me to the
EARTH
For that is where i shall
GO
If you ever take back your
LOVE

My blood pumps in the shape of your
NAME
Your soft lips carresing my ice-like
FLESH
I need this night to go oh so
SMOOTH
As smooth as your hands feel on my shredded
THIGH

I simply cannot truly
COMPREHEND
This new lease of life you have
GIVEN
I know my destiny has been
ALTERED
It is now enclosed within your
CHEST

So grant me my last dying
WISH
I need you to swear this
TRUE
Please don't kill me in the brutal
WAY
Of denying me your love
TONIGHT
©2007-2009 ~freakonherleash616
:iconfreakonherleash616:

Author's Comments

Another poem
For the same person :D

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That person must be v. lucky x
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Best poem of yours so far.
And I've read ALL your poems.

This one totally out-scales them all
Evokes a lot of emotion, love it
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I'm gonna comment it again 'cause I'm at work experience and bored, lol Cause I've finished EVERYTHING! lol
Ah well, I get to leave early ;) How cool is that?
But yes, straying from the point now, lol
I love this poem *cheesy grin*
And this bit sounds so good when you say it aloud, flows superbly
'I need this night to go oh so
SMOOTH
As smooth as your hands feel on my shredded
THIGH'

Fare thee well :) xxxxx

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You're so poisonous, you're poison ivy.

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